analysis of advert

although our image contains all the conventions of an advert, the image doesn't work effectively as it is the wrong shape and style to fit in a magazine and look as if it belongs there. It would preferably need to be in an A4 format and have a more striking colour. We created this by getting random images and trying to create a look that fitted with titles and random band names, hence the image not being as effective as we could create with our own choices.